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Timely writing tips from George Orwell

May 20, 2017 by Alan Rinzler

The classic dystopian novel 1984, George Orwell’s story about a futuristic totalitarian state, has been in the midst of a spontaneous sales explosion, catapulting to the top of bestseller lists at Amazon, the New York Times and independent retailers.

No surprise. The “alternative facts” dispatched from White House press conferences and early morning presidential tweets bear a stark resemblance to 1984’s newspeak, a language created by Orwell’s fictional government to limit thought and expression, and doublethink, promoting two contradictory ideas as true.

Making lies sound truthful

In 1946, three years before 1984 was published, George Orwell wrote an essay called Politics and the English Language. In the article, published in the journal Horizon, Orwell explained how political language is “designed to make lies sound truthful and murder respectable, and to give an appearance of solidity to pure wind.”

Sound familiar?

Orwell went on to say that political language was “necessarily vague or meaningless because it was intended to hide the truth rather than express it.” Instead, he urged writers to use “concreteness, clarity and individuality over political conformity”. He clearly felt an urgency to provide specific advice about this, fearing that otherwise the forces of newspeak would smother and defeat the truth forever.

Here are a few of the rules he claimed would defend against these dark forces. How? By encouraging better, clearer, writing that would compel more readers to take steps and defend their liberty against the reality of criminal dictatorship in their time. So excuse the somewhat humorous approach to this problem, but as worst-case examples of what Orwell opposed in political language, I’ll use a few from our very own president-for-now, Donald Trump.

Orwell’s press pass photo 1943

• Never use a metaphor, simile, or other figure of speech that has become meaningless with overuse.

Orwell described these as dying metaphors, and gave the examples of Achilles heel, “¨swan song and hotbed. He said they’d been twisted far from their original meeting and were used as weapons of deceit.

An example of an overused metaphor we’re hearing lately is the expression witch-hunt, as in “I’m the target of the single greatest witch-hunt in American political history!”

• Never use a long word where a short one will do

Definitely! Long words can be false fronts, cardboard cutouts to hide the writer’s real intentions — like “anti-establishment” or “incompetence”.

• If it’s possible to cut a word out, always cut it out

Right. Why say “bad stupid loser, lightweight moron, or total sleazebag”, when “opponent” is more accurate.

• Never use the passive voice where you can use the active

The passive voice is usually flat, lifeless, too ornate and academic, and puts readers to sleep.

• Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word, or jargon if you can think of an everyday English equivalent

Yes! Unnecessary pretense.

Go to work

If you’re worried about the future of this country and want to do something about it, take action by using your passion and skill as a writer. Build on whatever platform you have and write something, anything, from a letter to the editor, to an op-ed piece in your local media — print or online. Write a post, if you have a blog. Start a non-fiction political book or memoir or novel.

Writers write. It’s their greatest tool, their most powerful weapon. If you’re an aspiring writer or if you have to submit a thesis paper or something similar, look for a student college research guide to help you out in the process. Once you’re familiar with the basics, writing could be a piece of cake.

Some great words of inspiration

Here’s some final inspiration from another great writer, this one alive and full of spit.

Toni Morrison recently said, “This is precisely the time when artists go to work. There is no time for despair, no place for self-pity, no need for silence, no room for fear. We speak, we write, we do language. That is how civilizations heal.”

We welcome comments and opinions, so don’t hesitate to write us.

Filed Under: Craft of Writing Tagged With: 1984, Alan Rinzler, blog, craft, George Orwell, language, rules, The Book Deal, Trump, writers, writing

Comments

  1. akshay kumar says

    July 14, 2017 at 5:14 am

    I wish that I could post this on one of my blogs. One of the books I am currently reading is Orwell’s Why I Write.

  2. Lea Forslund says

    June 12, 2017 at 9:27 am

    I wish that I could post this on one of my blogs. One of the books I am currently reading is Orwell’s Why I Write. It is a hard book to put down. It is brilliant but of course, it is Orwell.

  3. Michael LaRocca says

    May 31, 2017 at 8:03 pm

    I enjoy going back to Politics and the English Language from time to time.

    This isn’t the place to discuss Trump’s policies, but what he’s doing with the language is positively criminal.

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