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The Book Deal

Women mystery writers break out of the shadows

November 13, 2014 by Alan Rinzler

The tired old stereotype of a mystery writer as some hard-boiled noir guy with a cigarette in one hand and a tumbler full of whiskey in the other is obsolete. Over. Done. Make way for Sisters in Crime, a nationwide organization of women mystery writers who are achieving commercial and literary … [Read more...]

Filed Under: Book Industry Trends, Craft of Writing, How To Get Published Tagged With: Alan Rinzler, author, consultant, developmental editing, developmental editor, editor, editorial consultant, fiction, mystery, novels, sisters in crime, thrillers, writer

How authors support their writing dreams

June 11, 2014 by Alan Rinzler

A few aspiring authors get to stay home and write all day. Think of them as the 1%. The rest need to worry about putting food on the table before they can focus on their literary dreams. They need to work a day job in order to pay bills. Or find the best stocks to buy in order to raise enough … [Read more...]

Filed Under: Craft of Writing, Writers at work Tagged With: Alan Rinzler, aspiring writer, author, day job, developmental editor, getting published, making a living, MFA, work life balance, writer

Ever wonder what a developmental editor could do for your book?

May 20, 2014 by Alan Rinzler

More and more writers are hiring their own developmental editors, whether they plan to self-publish their book or hope to land a literary agent and go for a book deal with a traditional publisher. To give you an idea what a professional developmental editor could do for your book, here’s a … [Read more...]

Filed Under: Book Industry Trends, Craft of Writing, Self-Publishing Tagged With: "narrative arc", Alan Rinzler, author, book, developmental, developmental editor, editor, how to, plot, self-publish, writer

Ask the editor: Breaking the “write what you know” rule

April 7, 2014 by Alan Rinzler

Q: I have a terrific story to tell, but it didn't actually happen to me. Is it possible to write with authenticity about something you haven't experienced firsthand? A: Many great books are written by authors who seem to have nothing in common with their character's experiences. Different gender, … [Read more...]

Filed Under: Ask the Editor, Craft of Writing Tagged With: Alan Rinzler, ask the editor, author, book, breaking the rule, craft of writing, developmental editor, editor, expert, novelist, rule, The Book Deal, write what you know, writer

Staying connected: You’re not alone

January 26, 2014 by Alan Rinzler

When you're writing in the zone, you feel confident and creative, ready for prime time, readers, agents, and publishers, right? But it doesn't always come that easily. When writers get stuck, those good feelings can drop away quickly. A lonely occupation Writing is a solitary business for … [Read more...]

Filed Under: Craft of Writing Tagged With: advice, Alan Rinzler, block, craft, developmental editor, editing, editor, help, self-doubt, writers, writers block, writing

Prequels build buzz!

December 16, 2013 by Alan Rinzler

Have you heard what some savvy authors are doing to build excitement and attract readers to their upcoming books? They're writing prequels: tantalizing teasers in short story form that preview the key characters and settings of an upcoming novel. Some prequels predate or provide backstories … [Read more...]

Filed Under: Book Industry Trends, How To Get Published, Marketing Your Book, Self-Publishing Tagged With: advice, Alan Rinzler, author, book, book deal, developmental editor, editor, fiction, marketing, prequel, self-publishing, writer

Too much vertical space in your manuscript?

November 25, 2013 by Alan Rinzler

In filmmaking, vertical space is shorthand for script pages with lots of white and not a lot of words. For scriptwriters it's the rule. A script has dialogue, brief notes for action on the screen and not much else. It makes for quick reading and ensures a kind of textual scarcity that directors … [Read more...]

Filed Under: Craft of Writing Tagged With: Alan Rinzler, author, book, craft of writing, developmental editor, editor, fiction, freelance, vertical space

How to grab, delight or shock your readers right from the start

October 8, 2013 by Alan Rinzler

"Every time mama came down on that shabby floor, the bullet lodged in my stomach felt like a hot poker." Claude Brown and I hunted through his manuscript for two days to find that moment and move it to the opening of his classic Harlem memoir Manchild in the Promised Land. We wanted to detail … [Read more...]

Filed Under: Craft of Writing Tagged With: Alan Rinzler, craft of writing, developmental editor, fiction, first sentence, non-fiction, opener, opening, short story, writer, writing

An interview with yours truly about self-publishing

September 26, 2013 by Alan Rinzler

A while ago I sat for an interview with Brian Felsen, CEO of BookBaby, a service provider for self-publishing authors. He asked a lot of good questions for authors about working with an editor, getting published, and effective book promotion. Here’s the video, in which we talk about how the … [Read more...]

Filed Under: Book Industry Trends, How To Get Published Tagged With: Alan Rinzler, author, book, bookbaby, developmental editor, editor, interview, self-publishing

How to find a hungry agent

August 29, 2013 by Alan Rinzler

Here's a literary agent who's very specific about the kind of book she'd like to see in her inbox: Working on anything like that? Or something close? Want to know more about this agent? Well you can find her on Twitter. She's Annie, of the Annie Bomke Literary Agency, tweeting as … [Read more...]

Filed Under: Book Industry Trends, How To Get Published Tagged With: agent, Alan Rinzler, book, developmental editor, editor, how to find an agent, literary agent, publishing, The Book Deal, Twitter, writer, Writer's Digest, writing

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About The Book Deal

Welcome readers.  Let me introduce myself and offer up some credentials for the opinions, perspectives and insights in this blog. In nearly … more »

Working with Alan

I can’t thank you enough!

"Working together was interesting, challenging, and fun. I can't thank you enough for taking my stories and putting them in a comprehensible order, focusing more on my younger, formative days with my parents, and helping me remember great events that added so much to the book."

– US Senator Barbara Boxer. Her memoir, The Art of Tough, was published by Hachette in June 2016.

Figure out how to get Alan on your side

"Figure out how to get Alan on your side. He took my rambling manifesto and helped me hone it into a sharp, funny, culture-changing book featured in the New York Times, the New Yorker, The Atlantic, the Times of London, and most recently on The Daily Show."

– Lenore Skenazy, author Free Range Kids – How to Raise Safe, Self-Reliant Children Without Going Nuts with Worry.

Enthusiastic, imaginative and razor sharp

"Alan is enthusiastic, imaginative, razor-sharp, concise. His line-editing is specific and actionable; his developmental advice truly invaluable, providing focus and direction to the often chaotic process of writing a first novel."

– David Tomlinson, author of The Midnight Man.

An advocate, friend and mentor

“Alan can tell you at one glance, where a manuscript works and where it doesn’t. More than an editor, he’s an advocate, friend, mentor, and a bullshit detector of the highest caliber.”

–  Celeste Chaney, author of In Absence of Fear

A 5-star Olympic Gold Medal for editing!

"Alan Rinzler has edited seven of my books, and no one compares to his competence as an editor. Everything I write he makes better. Alan knows the business, knows writing and understands a writer’s needs. He has my 5-Star Olympic Gold Medal for editing! I’m grateful to have had the opportunity to work with him."

– Michele Borba, author of Building Moral Intelligence, The Big Book of Parenting Solutions, and others.

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Wake up your readers! How to thicken a plot

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Memoir or novel for my true story?

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Is your book in need of emotional glue?

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Can I really become a better writer?

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7 techniques for a dynamite plot

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What to expect from a developmental editor

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