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The Book Deal

How winning a literary prize can change your life

May 14, 2013 by Alan Rinzler

"First, it got my book published," says Kirstin Scott, whose novel Motherlunge won the 2011 Association of Writers and Writing Programs Award. "And with that, the prize gave me readers." There's no doubt that winning a well-respected competition can help validate your work with agents and … [Read more...]

Filed Under: How To Get Published, Self-Publishing Tagged With: Alan Rinzler, author, award, developmental editor, fiction, Flannery O’Connor Award for Short Fiction, Iowa Short Fiction Award, literary, literary prize, novelist, prize, publication, winner, writer, writing

Writing a memoir: Intersecting memory and story

March 11, 2013 by Alan Rinzler

Writing a memoir is one of the most stimulating but difficult literary challenges an author can undertake. Nevertheless, it’s a hugely popular genre. Five of the top ten hardcover nonfiction books on the NY Times bestseller list this week are memoirs. Aspiring memoir writers can find help in … [Read more...]

Filed Under: Craft of Writing, Memoir Tagged With: Alan Rinzler, author, craft, developmental editor, editor, memoir, Tamim Ansary, workshop, writer, writing

The career-boosting power of your name on a book

February 11, 2013 by Alan Rinzler

Many authors I've worked with have written books that promoted and enhanced their professional lives. Some have written a book precisely with this hope in mind: to advertise their special skills and passions. Other writers have enjoyed the surprise of being propelled in their careers with major … [Read more...]

Filed Under: How To Get Published, Marketing Your Book Tagged With: Alan Rinzler, author, book, book marketing, career building, developmental editing, developmental editor, Getting Change Right, Jinny Webber, Michele Borba, novelist, Seth Kahan, The Big Book of Parenting Solutions, writer, writing

Walking in your character’s shoes: Writing with authenticity

January 21, 2013 by Alan Rinzler

Bestselling crime novelist Patricia Cornwell inhabits and writes from inside the mind of her lead sleuth, Dr.Kay Scarpetta, the medical examiner in a blockbuster series of 20 forensic thrillers and counting. To get the details exactly right, Cornwell has hung out in a coroner’s morgue to study … [Read more...]

Filed Under: Craft of Writing Tagged With: advice, Alan Rinzler, authenticity, character development, consulting, developmental editor, editor, fiction, Garth Stein, Kay Scarpetta, novel, Patricia Cornwell, Racing in the Rain, writer, writing

Ask the Editor: Can I become a better writer?

November 20, 2012 by Alan Rinzler

Q: Every rejection letter I get says there’s something wrong with my writing. Can I really get better at this? A: Yes, you can! Having edited hundreds of writers, I know for a fact that even the most seasoned, successful writers read, study, revise and rewrite, use a professional developmental … [Read more...]

Filed Under: Ask the Editor, Craft of Writing Tagged With: Alan Rinzler, Barry Eisler, book editor, craft, craft of writing, developmental editing, developmental editor, editor, Garth Stein, novelist, Tom Robbins, writer, writing

Ask the editor: An agent said my novel needs emotional glue. Help!

September 17, 2012 by Alan Rinzler

Q. An agent said my novel is missing emotional glue. Like it doesn’t stick together. What is emotional glue and how do I get it into my story? A. Emotional glue reveals a character’s internal reactions, ruminations, and anticipated responses to the dialogue and action of the story. It's the … [Read more...]

Filed Under: Ask the Editor, Craft of Writing Tagged With: Alan Rinzler, ask the editor, book editor, craft of writing, developmental editor, editor, emotional glue, fiction, novel, writing, writing tips

What writers can learn from Barry Eisler

June 2, 2012 by Alan Rinzler

It's inspiring when a successful author goes out of his way to help others in the craft of writing. Barry Eisler is one of those good guys. Though he'd probably rather be known as one baaad dude. He's a one-time CIA operative, a judo black belt and an intellectual property attorney, who's … [Read more...]

Filed Under: Book Industry Trends, Craft of Writing, How To Get Published, Self-Publishing Tagged With: Alan Rinzler, Amazon, Amazon Publishing, authors, Barry Eisler, craft of writing, getting published, Grub Street, Joe Konrath, Kindle, publishing, self-publishing, writers, writing

It’s the details, writers!

May 19, 2012 by Alan Rinzler

An author builds a narrative with thousands of tiny details. Even before a reader knows what the book is really about, it's through the gradual accumulation of these crucial moments, objects, movements, sounds, smells and touches that the power and meaning of the story emerges. As an editor … [Read more...]

Filed Under: Craft of Writing Tagged With: Alan Rinzler, details, developmental editing, developmental editor, editor, fiction, memoir, narrative, narrative non-fiction, novel, story, techniques, tips, writing

The Viagra Diaries: A self-publishing mega success story

March 26, 2012 by Alan Rinzler

"Barbara Rose Brooker is fearless. The Viagra Diaries does for single seniors what Helen Gurley Brown's Sex and the Single Girl and Erica Jong's Fear of Flying did for the women's sexual revolution in the sixties and seventies." -- Entertainment Tonight It's a blurb to die for, and well … [Read more...]

Filed Under: Book Industry Trends, How To Get Published, Marketing Your Book, Self-Publishing Tagged With: Alan Rinzler, Barbara Brooker, book deal, developmental editing, developmental editor, editor, HBO, self-publishing, Simon & Schuster, The Viagra Diaries, writers, writing

Creating a compelling narrative voice

March 16, 2012 by Alan Rinzler

How does an author of memoir or personal narrative transform a naked self into a compelling voice that tells a story readers can’t put down? This question arises frequently in my work as a developmental editor. One of best books on this technique is The Situation and the Story: the Art of Personal … [Read more...]

Filed Under: Craft of Writing Tagged With: Alan Rinzler, author, developmental editor, editing, memoir, narrative non-fiction, narrative voice, personal narrative, The Situation and the Story, Vivian Gornick, writers, writing

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About The Book Deal

Welcome readers.  Let me introduce myself and offer up some credentials for the opinions, perspectives and insights in this blog. In nearly … more »

Working with Alan

I can’t thank you enough!

"Working together was interesting, challenging, and fun. I can't thank you enough for taking my stories and putting them in a comprehensible order, focusing more on my younger, formative days with my parents, and helping me remember great events that added so much to the book."

– US Senator Barbara Boxer. Her memoir, The Art of Tough, was published by Hachette in June 2016.

Figure out how to get Alan on your side

"Figure out how to get Alan on your side. He took my rambling manifesto and helped me hone it into a sharp, funny, culture-changing book featured in the New York Times, the New Yorker, The Atlantic, the Times of London, and most recently on The Daily Show."

– Lenore Skenazy, author Free Range Kids – How to Raise Safe, Self-Reliant Children Without Going Nuts with Worry.

Enthusiastic, imaginative and razor sharp

"Alan is enthusiastic, imaginative, razor-sharp, concise. His line-editing is specific and actionable; his developmental advice truly invaluable, providing focus and direction to the often chaotic process of writing a first novel."

– David Tomlinson, author of The Midnight Man.

An advocate, friend and mentor

“Alan can tell you at one glance, where a manuscript works and where it doesn’t. More than an editor, he’s an advocate, friend, mentor, and a bullshit detector of the highest caliber.”

–  Celeste Chaney, author of In Absence of Fear

A 5-star Olympic Gold Medal for editing!

"Alan Rinzler has edited seven of my books, and no one compares to his competence as an editor. Everything I write he makes better. Alan knows the business, knows writing and understands a writer’s needs. He has my 5-Star Olympic Gold Medal for editing! I’m grateful to have had the opportunity to work with him."

– Michele Borba, author of Building Moral Intelligence, The Big Book of Parenting Solutions, and others.

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Ask the Editor

Tips for blending in the backstory

Tips for blending in
the backstory
2015-07-28T14:50:53-07:00
Tips for blending in the backstory
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Wake up your readers! How to thicken a plot

Wake up your readers!
How to thicken a plot
2015-07-28T15:29:05-07:00
Wake up your readers! How to thicken a plot
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Memoir or novel for my true story?

Memoir or novel
for my true story?
2015-07-28T20:47:16-07:00
Memoir or novel for my true story?
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Is your book in need of emotional glue?

Is your book in need of emotional glue?
2015-07-28T20:51:25-07:00
Is your book in need of emotional glue?
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Can I really become a better writer?

Can I really become a better writer?
2015-07-28T21:05:22-07:00
Can I really become a better writer?
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7 techniques for a dynamite plot

7 techniques for
a dynamite plot
2015-07-28T21:17:53-07:00
7 techniques for a dynamite plot
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What to expect from a developmental editor

What to expect from
a developmental editor
2015-07-28T21:21:18-07:00
What to expect from a developmental editor
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